Draft Front Cover 4

This is my draft front cover number 4, I have produced this is fireworks. the image is very dominated as the subject is looking at the camera and making eye contact with the audience. My house style is pink and black which matches the masthead. As my magazine is called 'LOUD' I feel that the house style fits well as the connotations are young, vibrant and fun. The music artists in the cover lines are emphasised as these things are most important and what attracts my audience. 

My target audience evaluated my front cover and gave me feedback. The artists names in the cover lines could be larger and more emphasised. As some text does not need to be emphasised I have overused the strokes around the text when it is not needed therefore the important names such as the music artists do not stand out as much as they should. 

In this front cover I have improved the cover lines and took on board the negatives from what my target audience have said. I have made the artists name's larger therefore they stand out more which attracts my audience as well as a stroke to emphasise. I have used a spacer in between each cover line to make it look more professional and so my audience do not get mixed up with each cover line. Another negative that was pointed out was that my main head line looks childish and the type that would be on a comic magazine.

I have rotated the price and barcode so there was space to add an issue date to make it look more professional and stylish. I have also changed my head line font to make it more classy and fits with the genre of pop and connotations of loud, young and fun.